Sunday, March 20, 2005

Caught in the rain...

It was late. His hotel was just a few metres away. We both sat in the car. Listening to the pouring rain, tapping on the car`s roof. Tomorrow, he`ll be leaving. To a faraway place. Back to his job. Back to his routines.

I have poor night vision. The rain made it worse. So, I couldn`t drive. He offered to stay for a few minutes longer. Was it just an excuse? No, I knew he didn`t want to leave. And I refused to let him go.

I looked at his face. Savouring every details. Every curves, every lines, every marks, every spots… The way he smiled, the way he talked, the sound of his laugh, the smell of his lips…. Will I ever see him again? Will he come back for me? Will he remember this moment?

Two evenings, passed by in 2 seconds. But I felt like I`ve known him from another life. We definitely clicked. But can we survive the long, winding journey ahead?

We shared a lot of things that night. Our lifetime stories unfold. When we were loss for words, we just held hands and let the silence speak.

Why is it when u find something so precious, so wonderful, so right… it is so difficult to hold on to it, no matter how hard you try? Within reach, yet you have to see it slip away? I was not ready to let go. I wanted that moment to last forever. I wanted time to stand still.

Then, the rain turned into a drizzle…

As I drove away, I saw him from the corner of my eye, standing at the curb, watching. I could feel my eyes slowly blurred by the salt water that had started to accumulate. I felt a lump in my throat. My heart was sinking. Is this the end, of a wonderful beginning?? Tears streamed down my cheeks.

Outside, it was still raining….

10 Comments:

Blogger Ir. Hanafi Ali said...

You write very well, Dr. You should, nay, must marry a writer. He could teach you a thing or two.

But not necessarily about writing, though, :)

8:26 AM  
Blogger munirah hayati said...

whoaahhhh.... i could cry right here & now reading this post if it weren't for my make-up :p

dr.mimi, i'll let u in a lil' secret - i know one blogger who's also feeling swept off his feet just like you ;)

here's for a happy ending to a wonderful beginning...!

11:27 AM  
Blogger marina said...

Hansac: Marry a writer?? Memang dia writer punnn :)

Maya: Nope, not in the same vicinity...

Nyonya: Waaahhh i guess cupid had been busy huh?? :) who is it?? Anyone i know??

7:13 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

CAn we please have his blog's name then...???

8:10 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

haa.. istikharah in order...

misty

1:32 PM  
Blogger munirah hayati said...

wait a minute, did u say you can smell his lips??! whoah, hold it!! Please remember Allah even when falling in love.
Love is all the sweeter if u practise some restraint before marriage.

It's like how tasty your food is when breaking a whole day fast...

5:13 PM  
Blogger marina said...

Misty: insyaallah

Nyonya: smelled like chicken, or was it fisherman friend?? He had a sorethroat.

7:06 PM  
Blogger atenah said...

aaaaaahhh, can i share yr love story with my blogger friends?

8:37 AM  
Blogger marina said...

Aiyoooo malu la tenah... hehehehe just for entertainment, sure can :)

5:11 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Where did you find it? Interesting read » »

6:44 AM  

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